Although she sells this book as a collection of short stories, I think it should be billed as a collection of vignettes.
NevaWrite
Monday, August 5, 2013
Sunday, July 28, 2013
If you read this, would you wanna keep reading?
If you read this, would you wanna keep reading? It's from a novella I'm working on, but this is killing me...do I start here, or do I start at the beginning? I wrote this part as a middle part, but I think it would make for a more interesting beginning, which would give me more room to play with the timeline and expose different players and motives in a more dramatic manner...any advice would be appreciated. :-)
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Thursday, July 25, 2013
Distortion by Lucie Smoker-A Book Review.
So, this seems like an almost impossible story to mess up. It has a little bit of all my favorite things; murder, mystery, romance, rock and art. But that's about all I enjoyed in this story.
What's the story about? It's about Adele Proust, an up and coming artist in Houston's Montrose District. She's got baggage, but strong and empowered by her talent and her friends, she's moving on through life. And she's doing great. In the beginning, she falls in with Greg Fowler-a super hot, womanizing lead singer for The Fury-Houston's hottest post punk band. On their first date(so to speak) a fire breaks out at the club and she stumbles on to a corpse and is able to remember that scene so well that after the place burns down, and the cops kick her out of the area, she is driven to go home and paint it while Mr. Fowler writes a song next to her. And then this story takes a dive. And it only gets worse as the story progresses.
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Saturday, July 20, 2013
Beat The Reaper, by Josh Bazell
"Great book if you want a quick, fast paced, witty and intelligent read. I enjoyed it thoroughly and I definitely recommend it. Full review under the picture.
Thursday, July 18, 2013
A poem-The Moon
It's when the moon starts to glow
Through the clouds late at night
An honest attempt
To give light to the dark
And the world is all quiet
Except for the moon and I
That's when I cry out
for reason
Or even some chaos
A rustling of leaves
Or a chirp from a bird
Or something in nothing
This silence just might be
The most deafening noise
That I've ever heard
Sometimes, I just wanna shout at the world
And make the birds and the leaves
Spring back to life
But I'm afraid that
I don't have all that much to say
So to what would this world be stirred?
Not sure why I'm shouting
Think I may need the attention
To have someone notice
I'm alive and I'm hurt
To hear a "Hello"
Or maybe they'll miss me
Or maybe my kiss
On their lips has been missed
And another day of that would be nice
It's been almost a decade
Since I first met the moon
And I'm still all alone
Still staring at this luminescent sky
And wishing this night would end
And these thoughts get no further
No matter how fast they race
No matter how much I try
I wake up wishing I hadn't
Reaching for my cigarette
And coffee
And conversation
Or just another reason not to die
They're getting harder to find
Those reasons I gathered
over the years
I could stack in my back pocket
To look at in the storm
When the moon is blocked behind gray clouds
But
My pocket's empty now
And it makes me wanna scream
I need a reason for tomorrow
But it feels like this won't change
Like I'm stuck here with these thoughts
And all this pain
And no refrain from this song
That won't stop playing late at night
I hate to be awake
There's tiny pains that I can't stop
Like my body's done with me
And cells are dying off
My body's giving up as well
And I know that I've neglected it
So I can't blame it
Should it cease to work by dawn
I guess I'm just broken
Inside and out
And hoping for a fix to the problem
A tool I could buy
Screws to hold me tight
Or maybe a stronger bead of solder
A fix that might last.
And if not
Then maybe something to put an end to the rot
A bullet?
Some pills?
A song for the dark!
The moon is too bright
And the clouds are too thick
And this silence is tearing me down
The coffee's too bitter
And the smoke's choking me
And this talk is just going around
In circles like the moon
And won't ever end
Like the reach of the moons
Outstretched hands
Holding me captive
And keeping me company
Wednesday, July 17, 2013
Book review-An Object Of Beauty By Steve Martin
I
had no idea what I was stepping into when I picked this book up. To be
fair, I only wanted to read it because Steve Martin wrote it. I saw him
on The Colbert Report, and he talked so little about it. I passed it
several times in the bookstores, thinking next time I'll pick it up.
Then I found it in the dollar store, and had to buy it. Then it sat
unread in my room for 6 months. With nothing left to read, I started it a
month ago...
What I will say is this; This ain't no comedy. It ain't the three amigos, and it sure as hell ain't Bowfinger...this is a beautifully written story of a world I never knew existed. And of one incredible woman who lived it entirely, loved it wholly, and seemed untouchable by its ever grinding gears.
I was afraid my complete lack of art world knowledge would render this unreadable, but the author describes these paintings in a manner even I could understand. And the little history lessons about the paintings shows his passion for the theme.
Now, the Story is about Lacey Yeager, as seen through the eyes of her friend, co-conspirator, and one time lover. Lacey Yeager is an up and coming art dealer, who gets her start at Sotheby's Auction House, and begins to develop a knack for guessing which pieces will sell best, and which will flop. She is by far what I would call the epitome of an anti-hero, in which I mean that I don't like her, but I do love her. In that everything she does is wrong, but not so wrong. I understand. She gets herself into trouble, and I wanna forgive her for it...but trouble has a way of catching up with us all in the end.
The majority of the story is set in New York, and I think Steve Martin has done an incredible job of capturing the city. The author also crafts some of the most beautiful sentences I've read in modern literature. A great many paragraphs are glided through as if they were poetry. His timing is impeccable, and his characters were almost all so well developed that I felt I knew them and how they would react to certain situations.
To be fair, he lost a star for the ending. I didn't care for it. It was...well, you read it, and you tell me. I just didn't care for it. Though to be fair, I never like the endings. I hate when I'm done with a book. It's just the worst feeling ever. But it helps when the ending gratifies at least a bit.
Kudos Mr. Martin. I'll definitely be looking out for more of your work.
What I will say is this; This ain't no comedy. It ain't the three amigos, and it sure as hell ain't Bowfinger...this is a beautifully written story of a world I never knew existed. And of one incredible woman who lived it entirely, loved it wholly, and seemed untouchable by its ever grinding gears.
I was afraid my complete lack of art world knowledge would render this unreadable, but the author describes these paintings in a manner even I could understand. And the little history lessons about the paintings shows his passion for the theme.
Now, the Story is about Lacey Yeager, as seen through the eyes of her friend, co-conspirator, and one time lover. Lacey Yeager is an up and coming art dealer, who gets her start at Sotheby's Auction House, and begins to develop a knack for guessing which pieces will sell best, and which will flop. She is by far what I would call the epitome of an anti-hero, in which I mean that I don't like her, but I do love her. In that everything she does is wrong, but not so wrong. I understand. She gets herself into trouble, and I wanna forgive her for it...but trouble has a way of catching up with us all in the end.
The majority of the story is set in New York, and I think Steve Martin has done an incredible job of capturing the city. The author also crafts some of the most beautiful sentences I've read in modern literature. A great many paragraphs are glided through as if they were poetry. His timing is impeccable, and his characters were almost all so well developed that I felt I knew them and how they would react to certain situations.
To be fair, he lost a star for the ending. I didn't care for it. It was...well, you read it, and you tell me. I just didn't care for it. Though to be fair, I never like the endings. I hate when I'm done with a book. It's just the worst feeling ever. But it helps when the ending gratifies at least a bit.
Kudos Mr. Martin. I'll definitely be looking out for more of your work.
Monday, December 28, 2009
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